After presenting my Poise prototype last week, I went back in and did some redesigning. I tried to keep in mind the comments from class and make the spread more organized and less text heavy. I focused on making things clear and concise. I played around with some of the typography of the page, including the folio and sidebar element.
I pulled an orange tone from the photo and added an extra pop to the sidebar, so that it would really grad the reader's attention and provide them with straight forward answers to the issue the text is addressing.
The page lacks white space, which contributes to a crammed look that bothers me. I need to figure out a way to make it all look like a package. I haven't quite got there yet but I'm not giving up.
Back to the drawing board.
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